Re: [tbb-dev] How much the Tor Browser is still a Bundle?

Hi,

Mark Smith wrote (11 Mar 2014 17:23:58 GMT) :

OK by me. My only suggestion is to consider changing the last one to:

"Please wait while a connection to the Tor network is established."

Just my 2cts: most technical documentation style guides I've read recommend to avoid the passive voice.

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